journal 15

            Growing up I never really heard much about the 1918 flu pandemic. It was more about the blizzard of ’78, and how much that impacted my family. With this being said, an environmental change only killing about 100 people, and causing a lifestyle change was able to have an immense impact, never mind the detriment … [Read more…]

project 1 draft 2

            The meaning and importance behind food has taken many sharp turns throughout the last decade and it is incredible to see how the different forms of food can affect every individual and families in its own unique way. It has gone from families scavenging for their own food and making a home cooked meal, to … [Read more…]

rough draft 500 words

The meaning and importance behind food has taken many sharp turns throughout the last decade and it is incredible to see how the different forms of food can affect every individual and families in its own unique way. It has gone from families scavenging for their own food and making a home cooked meal, to … [Read more…]

journal 13

            When reading this section, I first grazed the text and figured out what topics were going to be covered. Anticipating, representing, and answering different types of objections. In the first few pages they mention the importance of engaging others in your writing. This doesn’t happen by only stating the opinions you think, but it can … [Read more…]

journal 12

Progress Report:             When first starting this essay, I was exactly sure of where I wanted to go with my thoughts. I was sitting in front of my computer knowing that I had read all three articles and fleshed them out as much as I could, but also was clueless on how to connect one of … [Read more…]

journal 11

            When reading the piece Starting with What Others Are saying, I was intrigued by many ways in which I can enhance my writing. I feel as though this article gave me a lot of ideas I wouldn’t never thought of; all which will give my paper a stronger and more clear argument. This will allow my point … [Read more…]

journal 2

Throughout high school, I never went into true depth on what criteria to follow when writing rough drafts, finally drafts, or even when editing someone else’s draft.  I was more focused on getting a solid draft under my belt to pass in and receive a grade. I only took a true English (writing) course up until … [Read more…]

journal 10

Page 7 paragraph 2             During this paragraph Pollan talks about the deterioration of real food and meals. He talks to Harry Balzer and was informed about his point that he believes people don’t know what cooking a real meal is like. He talked to people who believe that making a frozen pizza or taking soup … [Read more…]